This is a dedicated discussion space for Professor Renzi's ENG 353 course during Spring 2012. We will blog as a way to practice analytical reading and writing, as well as to continue our discussions this semester beyond the confines of our class meetings.
Saturday, March 31, 2012
The New Negro Woman-Naja Tatum
Friday, March 30, 2012
Voyage in the Dark final-Ali Pepin
The fact that she was on a boat in water seemed a prominent theme that I've noticed among our books. The Awakening, New England Nun, Voyage, Three Dreams in a Desert-all of these readings talk about water in them as though a form of rebirth. It's as though water is fluid like life and represents how women in particular can be recreated and let their soul be controlled by the water.
Even babies and children have been prominent in most stories thus far. It's as though these "New Women" are finding that children are detrimental to their life and taking their soul. With Anna, her abortion was for the fact that she couldn't take care of a child, and it was her promiscuous actions had come full circle to their consequences. She was too immature-and almost too much of a drunk to realize what her life was becoming.
The alcohol she used to cover up her feelings to realize what she was doing, and the uncertainty with Walter left her in this downward spiral into prostitution (somewhat). This is similar to The Awakening as well, with how women are controlled by men in a way with how one man breaks their heart, then it's all downhill and their lives "suck" from there. For example, Anna's heart is broken by Walter, then she continues drinking, sleeping with other men, and finally gets pregnant and can't have a child, so she gets an abortion where from the drugs she has hallucinations and the book comes to an end.
This blog is a bit all over, but I had to cover all that I saw when reading this book.
Connecting Patterson to Iron Jawed Angels
Wednesday, March 28, 2012
Voyage in the Dark-Naja Tatum
Voyage in the Dark- Emily Armstrong
Voyage in the Dark
Voyage Ending
Vincent vs The Doctor
Voyage in the Dark Part 3
The "dark wall" in "Voyage in the Dark"
"There was a little girl in a pink dress eating a large yellow biscuit studded with currants - what they called a squashed-fly biscuit - and a little boy in a sailor suit, trundling a hoop, looking back over his shoulder at the little girl. There was a tidy green tree and a shiny pale blue sky, so close that if the little girl had stretched her arm up she could have touched it. (God is always near us. So cosy.) And a high, dark wall behind the little girl.
Underneath the picture was written:
The past is dear,
The future is clear,And, best of all, the present.
But it was the wall that mattered.
And that used to be my idea of what England was like. 'And it is like that, too,' I thought." (Rhys 149).I found it very existential of Anna to like the "dark wall" rather than all of the pretty colors in the picture (149). She goes out of her way to describe them, but then she likes the background better. I think this signifies how she feels lonely and does not know what to do. She wants to blend into her surroundings and not stand out anymore because she does not get what she wants when people do pay attention to her. I was confused, though, about the last sentence. I did not understand to what she was referring. Is England like the "dark wall" or the colorful scene in the foreground? If so, maybe she has changed as a person and feels differently about the way things are going for her.
Tuesday, March 27, 2012
Voyage in the Dark Ending
Voyage in the Dark (end section)
Voyage in the Dark
Voyage In the Dark-The Title
Monday, March 26, 2012
Significance of Water in Voyage in the Dark
Voyage in the Dark and Promiscuity
Alice Paul Follow Up+ Voyage in the Dark
From what I have seen in Voyage in the dark thus far is that Anna is very different than Alice. She sees withdrawn and very subdued. I wonder if we will see Anna develop into the independent individual Alice Paul depicts. She seems rather depressed and her heart is breaking for the loss of Walter. How does this differ from Alice Paul's dedication for politics over a man?
Voyage in the Dark--Kori Cramer
Voyage in the Dark -parzyck
Like many others I found it the passages interesting that talked about Anna’s hatred of being white and her want to be black. On page 72 I found this passage to be very interesting, “…and that I would never be able to explain to her that I hated being white. Being white and getting like Hester, and all the things you get –old and sad and everything.” This really shows how much Anna really hates being white, but I was confused as to why she could never tell Francine this? I feel like Anna has a real struggle with her identity in this book, she doesn’t know what she sexually wants and what she struggles with her racial identity as well. I am kind of just confused by her confusion of herself.
Voyage in the Dark part 2
Voyage In The Dark - Part II
Voyage in the Dark
Sunday, March 25, 2012
Voyage in the Dark- Reading #2
Voyage in the Dark
iron jawed/voyage-ali pepin
one was that i found it very uplifting of how all the women stood together even if it meant many of them landed themselves in jail. this was prevelant in the jail cafeteria when alice paul came back to eat with the other women she did the hunger strike and all the women followed suit and also did the hunger strike. it's interesting how they were all very confident in eachother to hold steady and not give in as a group. also when the woman did not leave with her senator husband, this showed rebellion in her own way.
as for voyage in the dark-i'm still confused as to what Anna wants. She has sex with walter multiple times and is left sitting up waiting afterward and she just sits there thinking. she falls in love with him, but then he doesn't want her, so she's upset. but then she is promiscuous herself and then freaks out when laurie says she's a prostitute. i guess i don't understad what she wants.
she also seems very unwilling to change. the ways in which she tries to resist England in contrast to her 'beautiful Carribean' just shows she's constantly looking at the negative of the town rather than embracing where she is in the present. it's almost as though she's high maintenance, even when she doesn't get her way with Walter-how he leaves her, she's upset (which like i stated before is mostly her loving him). also the part where she tries to get walter to take her home and he won't then she kind of childishly states "oh well i'm leaving you, and i'm not telling you where i'm going." it seems altogether childish and immature.
